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| (...) Hi Cale!! The story gives a good introduction to the main characters. Good job! I like the little exposition about Joshua and Catherine's past, and yet you manage to keep Catherine seem a bit secretive. An air of mystery around her motives. I (...) (24 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Sounds good so far! I do have a few suggestions, though. ;) First, the last paragraph is way too long. It really needs to be broken up a bit. Also, you may want to print out some hard copies and get people to make corrections. That should help (...) (24 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| This is just a teeny, tiny, not so much that anyone would notice bit late, but I finally got around to Writing a story about my character's arrival on the Isle of mist. (URL) I'm not a practiced story teller so any feedback would be appreciated. I (...) (24 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Well, I like the stories more than anything, so it doesn't matter to me too much if it doesn't have pictures. :) If you want to go back and take pictures later, go for it. :) Jeff (24 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| <posted to lugnet.castle.org.cw> (...) Cool! The first permanent structure (not to say that a cabin isn't permanent, but stone is always more stable :) (...) First of all, I see that (URL) is finally back up. I really like your site, and I look (...) (24 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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