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Re: Book I of the Hillsfar Chronicles: A Friend Returns
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lugnet.castle.org, lugnet.castle
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Mon, 19 Feb 2001 23:58:07 GMT
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Wow, that is cool man! You managed to tell a great story without the use of
much violence, which I tend to base my stories around. I really didn't
notice too many of the blurry pics in the story and all the shots were
well-taken. I liked all the background you used (houses, the Spitfire
Tavern, Anyon Steele's shop). I really had to stop and say to myself "Man,
he made all those houses and shops just to add background to his story!" I
think it's great that you went that far to enhance your story.
Also, the darkness of the pictures conveyed the feeling of dusk very well.
Did you take those pictures in a darker room, or did you darken them on your
computer? *Another* thing I thought was cool was the picture of Tabbor and
Jakob looking over the balcony at the line of torches winding through the
mountains.
Wilson
In lugnet.castle.org, Chris Maddison writes:
> Hi all, after about a year of just sitting around, reading everyone else's
> marvelous stories and ballads, I decided I had to do one too. The pictures
> for this story were taken with Shiri's digicam when she was here last week.
> I apologize ahead of time for the fuzzy pics; those were the ones I took.
> :-) So, without further ado, I give you...
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> http://www.geocities.com/xcalabur18/ch1_1.html
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> LMKWYT!
> -Chris
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