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Re: Forest of Blood: Episode 2
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lugnet.castle
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Sat, 3 Feb 2001 18:51:41 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Joel Jacobsen writes:
> Well; it took me long enough. Sadly, a bit of writter's block and burnout
> from trying to clean up the images slowed the process as my moods took an
> abrupt left turn into .space as may have been noticed the last few weeks (Or
> not).
Agreed. Cleaning up images is the hardest part about presenting stories.
Building and story writing are easy (well - in comparison), but to present
it in a satisfactory form is a real pain.
> I've also changed the formatting of the story to shorten it. 10 pages just
> seemed silly. As such, Episode 1 has been redone as well. I have also
> corrected a few spelling and gramatical errors.
Always a plus :) In my experience, the less number of pages you have, the
better and simpler it is.
> Please let me know what you think! *8)
So far, so good. I'm starting to get a grip on your characters and
hopefully a lot of things will be answered soon enough.
-- Pawel
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| (...) It would have been fine if I hadn't used gray roadplates as the backdrop. It worked fine for my non-castle MOC's of late, but for this it just distracted from the 'set' as it were... I wish I could find better forest pictures, though. I'm (...) (24 years ago, 5-Feb-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| Well; it took me long enough. Sadly, a bit of writter's block and burnout from trying to clean up the images slowed the process as my moods took an abrupt left turn into .space as may have been noticed the last few weeks (Or not). While it's nothing (...) (24 years ago, 3-Feb-01, to lugnet.castle)
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