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Re: The Verneer Chronices - Chapter 1
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lugnet.castle
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Mon, 31 Jan 2000 04:21:40 GMT
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> Omigosh, that was so great!!!
> I can't wait for more!
> Now some constructive comments:
> Setup is good on my computer but it's an exact fit on my 1000x800 screen, and
> most people don't use such big screens.
> I LOVE your forest and the "movement" pictures. How'd you do them?
> Your characters are really good, I liked the "dialog" too.
> You had some typos/spelling mistakes in some areas (e.g. kindom, a assasin,
> etc.), but no biggie.
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> Once my Lion's Cove and Characters are finished, I'll start some real stories -
> like the one in my Scar page but with more dialog. I have too many ideas right
> now!
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> I want to see more! When's the next Chp. coming?
>
> -Shiri
Thanks ... I got a hold my Cyberstudio and touched the page up a lil bit (spell
check, background, one column - the good stuff;)
The forest took some bricks from Naboo Swamps as well as arches from ... I
dunno;) The movements was kind of accidental. Verneer was on a string and
spinning. As I took the shot, he was still spinning, and that's how that got
captured. I looked at it and though "neat - EXACTLY what I wanted", so it
stayed.
I'm not quite sure what chapter two will be about yet (specifically - the whole
story is set, but the details are still not quite there ... ;)
-- pn
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