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Re: The Verneer Chronices - Chapter 1
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Date: 
Mon, 31 Jan 2000 02:50:40 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
I put together the first chapter of the Verneer Chronicles.  The first
chapter is titled "Of Katherine" and can be read here:

http://members.xoom.com/verneer/story/

Let me know if the set-up is good.  I did it at home so I didn't have access
to my good HTML software.

-- pn

http://members.xoom.com/legocastle/new/ - Castle World.

Omigosh, that was so great!!!
I can't wait for more!
Now some constructive comments:
Setup is good on my computer but it's an exact fit on my 1000x800 screen, and
most people don't use such big screens.
I LOVE your forest and the "movement" pictures. How'd you do them?
Your characters are really good, I liked the "dialog" too.
You had some typos/spelling mistakes in some areas (e.g. kindom, a assasin,
etc.), but no biggie.

Once my Lion's Cove and Characters are finished, I'll start some real stories -
like the one in my Scar page but with more dialog. I have too many ideas right
now!

I want to see more! When's the next Chp. coming?

-Shiri
http://www.geocities.com/shiri_lego/



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(...) Thanks ... I got a hold my Cyberstudio and touched the page up a lil bit (spell check, background, one column - the good stuff;) The forest took some bricks from Naboo Swamps as well as arches from ... I dunno;) The movements was kind of (...) (24 years ago, 31-Jan-00, to lugnet.castle)

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I put together the first chapter of the Verneer Chronicles. The first chapter is titled "Of Katherine" and can be read here: (URL) me know if the set-up is good. I did it at home so I didn't have access to my good HTML software. -- pn (URL) - Castle (...) (24 years ago, 31-Jan-00, to lugnet.castle)

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