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Re: A cry for help !
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lugnet.castle
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Wed, 16 Jul 2003 03:04:46 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Joey Finnell wrote:
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Hi all
I was hoping that some of you could maybe give me a few pointers on what I
should do to improve my poor writing skills, I feel that I need to improve
before I go any farther in illustrating my story so any help you guys can
give me on this subject would be greatly appriciated, thanx in advance. heres
a sample of my writing:
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Well, a few months ago, I experienced some similar
problems with writing, so you might find the below
thread useful:
http://news.lugnet.com/castle/?n=15291
<excerpt snipped>
So far, it’s looking decent, but in my personal bias, it
seems a bit Tolkeinesque (with three headed dogs, elves and
goblins, what can you expect? :)
However, it does read through smoothly, although it would
be nice to see more description in regards to character
description (but since you’re doing an illustrated story,
those details aren’t exactly pertinent, but they do attribute
an additional kick to the writing, exceptionally minute
character detailswhich make all of the difference.)
exemplis gratis “Malak’s face appeared brazen when confronted with
the knowledge of the advancing goblin force, although it could be
plainly seen that even he reserved his share of doubt in conflict.”
Well, that’s my take on the subject anyway. I hope that
was at least of some help.
Osprey, over and out
M. Aaron Hein
http://www.lugnet.com/1112/
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