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Re: Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 3 Online
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lugnet.castle
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Sat, 12 Jul 2003 23:22:00 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Anthony Sava wrote:
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Any and all feedback, good and bad, is greatly appreciated and welcomed.
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I know it’s just mean to start from here but...
I’ve got to say, I’m out. That’s just a little too dark for my light
(meaning relax) reading tastes (I should’ve taken the chapter heading more
literally). My only complaint is an overdose on the demons, evil, temples,
witches, etc. but that is your style so it is for the reader (me) to put the
book down. No negative comment, just too far out of my reading zone... That said
your writing has improved and it wasn’t a great chap for you to display your
picture talents but they were still good.
I’m sorry if this is a downer or annoying or offending: I just thought
that in your place (with lugnet being more-or-less a test market) I would like
to know why someone stopped reading...
God Bless and keep writing,
Nathan (who will also venture a quick prediction that the voice
in the temple is the black dragon from the first book who will be brought back
to life and rampage only to be stopped by her child, the new dragon...)
P.S I somehow doubt you’ll stop at two books so I’ll probably be back in on your
3rd.
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| (...) I'm very sorry you feel that way, but believe it or not I see where you're coming from. You've been a loyal reader for quite a long time now, and I hate to see you go. (...) And I appreciate it greatly, I really do. (...) It's a good guess. Of (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jul-03, to lugnet.castle, FTX)
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| | Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 3 Online
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| Hey folks, I know it's been a while since I've posted anything to my story. I don't know how many of you I've lost as readers, but I hope to win you back somehow! Maybe I'll even gain a few new readers while I'm at it. Before you read the chapter I (...) (21 years ago, 9-Jul-03, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, FTX) !
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