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Re: Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 3 Online
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lugnet.castle
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Thu, 10 Jul 2003 00:53:42 GMT
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Hello Anthony,
I must say that over the years, your writing has improved greatly. The
characters seem to be developing much more smoothly in this story, and the
writing is more complex and intricate. All in all, I enjoy it very much.
The minor flaws I did notice were mainly a few grammar and tense issues inside
this chapter, but a quick proof-read combined with a little correction should
make short work of those. :-D
Anyway, fantastic work on both the dragon and this new Chapter of Ikros. Keep
it up.
-Ben Harris (aka Tycho)
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| (...) Thanks much! (...) My regular editor was busy this week... yeah... that's it... :) (...) Thanks much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've actually already started work on chapter 4, so who knows... And thanks for the reply! --Anthony (21 years ago, 11-Jul-03, to lugnet.castle, FTX)
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| | Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 3 Online
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| Hey folks, I know it's been a while since I've posted anything to my story. I don't know how many of you I've lost as readers, but I hope to win you back somehow! Maybe I'll even gain a few new readers while I'm at it. Before you read the chapter I (...) (21 years ago, 9-Jul-03, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, FTX) !
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