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| (...) Hey, pretty good job, Joey! The cyclops is rather strange, i admit...more good Figbashing, though! Unless it is your writing style, though, here is a comment about the writing: writing things as if they happened is better than if they are (...) (22 years ago, 10-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Most fiction is written in past tense, yes. Though choosing between one and the other is a personal choice. However, you should stick to one of them. I noticed your story switches from past tense to present half way through, and then switches (...) (22 years ago, 10-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| I really only did this to goof off, but I liked how it turned out, so I decided to keep it, I was never really good at writing, I myself know that the writing needs works, but do you think it should be more detailed? or should I leave it short and (...) (22 years ago, 11-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| As I said in the post to Alex I'm not the best writer, I need to work on that part for sure, I appriciate the advice. Thanx P.S. The next part is coming soon. Laterz (...) (22 years ago, 11-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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