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http://www.lugnet.com/~1168/beyhadur/
Epic of the Beyhadur: The Rising
(1st Half)
Featuring the arrival of the Beyhadur himself and the beginning of the
rebellion against the Lonsans. Also, the teachings of the Beyhadur.
"Beyhadur" is ancient Olmish for "The Hand of God", and refers to God's Holy
Warrior on Earth, bearer of the mystical Durzein Sword.
Criticism is always welcome, even if it does hurt a little. Please don't
let that stop you.
:o)
-Lenny
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| (...) Heh...I like the eastern references you threw in with the shrouded assassin. (very interesting...) (...) If I wrote the story, I would have named the main character 'Abu Sayyaf' (or Abu Saif) 'Bearer of the Sword', but all sounds well. (...) (...) (22 years ago, 10-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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