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In lugnet.castle, Anthony Sava writes:
> I've given a lot of thought to publishing my work. And I've decided to do it.
> After I finish publishing the Chonicles, I will be, as you suggested, fleshing
> out my story to make it in more of a 'novel' form. I seriously doubt I'd make
> it to any of the best sellers lists, but it'd be nice to own my own book. I'm
> flattered you think so highly of it.
>
> And last but not least, thanks for the wonderful feedback!
>
> --Anthony
I have also enjoyed and await the coming chapters. However, since you have
decided to write this into a book format I think it would be in your best
interest to remove any profanity from some of the earlier chapters. This
would give the book a more wholesome look and would prevent people being
offended. The fantasy aspects remind me much of the Narnia series. And
although this isn't written toward children, I still think it would only
benefit you to edit slang and/or inappropriate language out of it. This is
my two cents. -Dan
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