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| (...) Thanks much! I don't know if I'll be putting out a new movie, I'm all out of good* music! But maybe, just maybe I can scrounge something up. (...) Chapter one of Chaos Skies won't be ready till at least after Christmas, if not after the new (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Hi Matt, I had a similar reaction. I couldn't find my way through your sentences. And I am a very skilled reader. (...) Your poetry is fine but your sentences are too long. (...) Nah, the sentences are just too long. Your poetry and meaning are (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Well, that's a shame to hear... When I write, I tend to place it in a poetic stance, however, I've seen the notion that some people prefer the more 'straightforward' type of writing, which I find rather boring. (...) You'll find (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Well, Matt, I'm not sure how much my comments will be "appreciated" as they are going to be in the vein of "discouraging words". I got about half-way through the second line of the first sentence, then pretty much gave up. I scrolled down through (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Did you mean by any chance, your story dwarfs in five dollar words compared to mine, or the other way around? Hmm...^_^ (...) Thanks for the feedback. (...) Heh...I hardly read enough as is...I draw a lot of anime, though, so that's a source (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Superbly written Matt. You've really captured the essence of aristocracy in the way your characters speak. I must say the amount of five dollar words in your story signifigantly dwarfs the number in my own. However, and maybe it's just me, and (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) F f f f finally. (...) wELL YA KNOW IM A FAN. (...) HMMM ITS OK BUT MAYBE SOME PICS FROM THE NEW STORY WOULD BE BETTER, BUT HEY MAYBE U DIDN'T DO THE NEW STORY YET. (...) AS ALWAYS THE DRAGON AND GRIFFIN LOOKIN KOOL. ALL NEW CHARS ARE GOOD BUT (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Hello, just checking .castle recently, and there didn't seem to be much activity, so I decided, why not unveil the next part of my online novella, Anachronistic Skies. The most recent addition deals with some rather interesting dialogue. Hope it is (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Sava is giving himself a run for his own money!?!?!?! What are you talking about Erick? Though TKOI is the best Epic in Lego storying telling history, I think it helps that it is fully illustrated and complete. ;-) Looking foward to the sequel (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| Anthony, Great intro. Sound really adds a lot to a presentation. The one technical comment I have is to reconsider having a flash animation on your intro page - on many computers that don't have flash, it comes up as a big broken link in the middle (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle)
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