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Re: My Starcruiser
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Date: 
Thu, 22 Jul 1999 03:46:43 GMT
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In lugnet.build, Jeremy H. Sproat writes:
Alex wrote:
Hey Jeremy,
how about rating my ship?

Well, I don't generally rate other peoples' models; I'm typically more of a
selfish and anti-social type.  But you asked.  :-,  I'm not going to be
gentle, but please bear with me...

A starship that size would need really big engines.  Take a look at Star
Wars and Star Trek, the majority of their ships have large and cool-looking
engine parts.  A comparably-sized real-world vehicle -- say, an AH-64 Apache
Longbow -- has a very large and noticable drive section (the main rotor).
Plus, what I take it you indicate is the bridge (the globe on top) looks
more like a mission module, easily detached and so on.  Also, a mid-size
combat ship such as this needs at least one YBBG (Your Basic Big Gun, the
bigger the better), otherwise it would be little more than a glorified
transport.

For reaslism (accounting for sci-fi), I'd give it a 5.


Realism, hmm, the engine? well, there's a cocpit in the back...
no room.
Believe me, my newer version of this ship HAS a ybbg.(but no bridge.)
I'll admit that the bridge is lame.

Looks -- this is the second hardest part of modelling.  It has the general
shape of a brick, with some flimsy attachments.  (1)  Good base, okay
peripherals.  However!  The cockpit section is way cool.  I am seriously
coveting the double Explorien wing design, and I will steal the idea at some
point.  Plus, I see a couple of largish cannons on the forward set of wings
that also look veeery cool.  (I wish I could see the hinge better; I may
borrow that design also.)

For looks, I'd give it a 7.


What hinge?
HAH. Everyone falls for this...see the top plates? Those go over the edge
of the inner tunnel.  in the pic, it lookes bigger than it really is!
I know. I looooooved the cockpit design.
Fine. copy my design.  if u can, though, give me credit?


Presentation -- this is the killer and is difficult to master, impossible
for some (2).  There's just the one semi-blurry photo; it doesn't show many
details.  I suspect some (or many) close-ups will greatly improve anyone's
rating of this ship.

For presentation, I'd give it a 3.

presintation... sorry, but i only take 1 pic of most of my ships...

If these categories were weighted with looks being most important and
presentation being the least important (3), I'd give your model an overall
rating of about 6.  Meaning:  there is definitely room for improvement, but
it has a lot of inherent coolness.  I'm really excited to see more Lego
models from you.  :-,

Cheers,
- jsproat

thanx
1.  I know how this is; I've done it hundreds of times:  you've put a lot of
work into putting together the bulk of the body, and you're tired, and so
you snap some wing pieces on.  However, the day after I am generally
disappointed, so I re-build the external bits and really beef them up.  It's
always been worth the time.

2.  For an example of bad presentation of models, take a look at my Web
site!

3.  Looks = 50%, Realism = 40%, Presentation = 10%; which I suspect is close
to how we all rate our own models...

--
Jeremy H. Sproat <jsproat@io.com>
http://www.io.com/~jsproat
Darth Maul Lives

alex



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  Re: My Starcruiser
 
(...) Cool! WHen can we see it? (...) Sure; I try to give everyone whom I've ripped off due credit. Cheers, - jsproat (25 years ago, 22-Jul-99, to lugnet.build)

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(...) Well, I don't generally rate other peoples' models; I'm typically more of a selfish and anti-social type. But you asked. :-, I'm not going to be gentle, but please bear with me... A starship that size would need really big engines. Take a look (...) (25 years ago, 22-Jul-99, to lugnet.build)

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