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Re: Zenith MOC
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lugnet.space
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Wed, 26 Feb 2003 06:52:28 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Travis Kunce writes:
> Kane Starcrafters is pleased to announce its first luxury sports starcraft,
> the Zenith. Designed with speed in mind, the Zenith features dual rear
> offset thrusters and dual antigravity units in the front. The ample
> cockpit, designed for maximum comfort and space is filled with the latest
> communications and navigation systems, and is easily accessisble through the
> hydraulic canopy.
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> http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=35102
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> -tk
Travis,
I like:
o The sketch, very nice design.
o The cockpit: interior and canopy
o The choice of pieces: big inverse slopes for intakes.
Some Suggestions:
o A little more care in transitions. The nose hits the mid section
with the curved edges rather abruptly.
o Some detail inside the intakes
o Some greeblies or detail connecting the vents and the engine
pods on the aft section. They seem stuck on to me.
o Go back to your sketch, one of the neat looking things is the
hose looking things surrounding the middle just before the
cockpit. Use some hose elements and create that.
It'll give it a space hot rod feel.
You have a good design for a great MOC. I feel, though, your model is a bit
clunky compared to your sketched goal. Just my humble opinion.
Keep buildin' em spacey.
Chris <><
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