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Re: CW Story: An Unexpected Reunion
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Fri, 8 Mar 2002 05:01:12 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Wilson Raska writes:
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> > http://home.sofast.net/~raska/stories.html
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> Your use of lighting was my favorite facet of this story. Both the late
> night at the campfire and the moment when the beast enters the cave with
> daylight coming in from the entrance.
Thanks, I really tried to adjust the lighting to convey the feeling of each
scene. After Jeff Stemble and a few other pointed out on my Cave of Exile
story, that the pics should be darker, I've really been taking that into
consideration on all my stories thus far; and I agree, it does enhance the
story quite a bit.
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> It's that kind of attention to detail that can bump a good story to a
> complete read. Your attention is then taken up by the story itself and not
> by your mind constantly reminding you that you are reading about legos :)
Thanks, good to know!
> It's good to see the old archers back in full force. Their overconfidence
> could prove to be their downfall since Vincent, although seemingly in a
> lesser position, is still full of venom and willing to bite given an
> opportunity.
Yeah, Locke is naturally pretty cocky, so that could be one if his
weaknesses in this position, but we'll just have to wait and see what
happens, won't we?
Wilson
http://home.sofast.net/~raska/
We'll ride the spiral to the end and may just go where no one's been. . .
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