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CW Story: An Unexpected Reunion
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 6 Mar 2002 23:32:49 GMT
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Hello everybody, I'm finally out of my LEGO-slump that I've been having
recently, and I've just completed the next installment in my Castle World
stories. This story takes place after Vincent and Seifer escape from the
Cave of Exile (a long wait, I know, but at least it's finally done). You'll
find the new story, An Unexpected Reunion, in the Castle World Stories section:
http://home.sofast.net/~raska/stories.html
Let me know what you think.
Wilson
http://home.sofast.net/~raska/
We'll ride the spiral to the end and may just go where no one's been. . .
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Message has 4 Replies: | | Re: CW Story: An Unexpected Reunion
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| (...) section: (...) The plot thickens! Very nice job, Wilson. I've been waiting to see what would happen to old Vincent after escaping all those traps and spells. Of course, you know, this means I'll be waiting for the next chapter, and the next, (...) (23 years ago, 7-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Your use of lighting was my favorite facet of this story. Both the late night at the campfire and the moment when the beast enters the cave with daylight coming in from the entrance. It's that kind of attention to detail that can bump a good (...) (23 years ago, 7-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Daniel Ravenda's reply (from his reply to Chris's village): (...) Yeah, I wanted to include that little twist in there, just to enhance the cliffhanger effect. (...) Yes, I like creating stories in the forest too, because you can pretty much (...) (23 years ago, 8-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Congrats on getting your chapter done! It's very good. I agree with Pawel - the lighting lends a lot of feel to the chapter. I like how the fire is luminous... very sweet. Good plot twists, cliffhanging! Altogether a good job and I'm lookin' (...) (23 years ago, 8-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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