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Re: How about another short comic?
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 12 Dec 2001 21:17:27 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Adrian Drake writes:
> > This is my first foray into comic style storytelling, and I think I really
> > like it. This storyline is currently independent of my other one with the
> > Kobayashis on the Isle Of Mist, but you never know, they might join together
> > somewhere down the road...
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> > Check it out, and let me know what you think of the layout and text. Is it
> > easy enough to read and follow?
> >
> > http://www.brickfrenzy.com/castle_cw_01a.html
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> The format makes for a fast and friendly read. Navigation is also a breeze.
> I see the way that you took your pictures (above angle outside the building)
> made for easy editing (... "just add text!" ...) I thought the blinding spell
> was funny (the whole comic had a lighter subtone to it).
That was my goal in this. Xander and Serena are comic heroes in the vein of
the Hercules and Xena television shows, so there will be a reasonable dose
of comedy in it. As for the photos, I planned them such that I could easily
stick the text in, yeah. I'd hate to obscure character faces :)
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> The thing with the comic view is that it's such a fast read - which is good,
> but I'm still left wanting more :)
Indeed it does go very fast. There are 14 images in the storyline, but
without much text on each image, the story moves quickly. Even so, it took
about 6 hours to make this issue. It may be easier to read, but it takes a
lot more work.
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> > There's also a new characters page and a slightly new layout on the main
> > castle page, if you're interested in a little backstory on my new characters
> > (there will be more, of course)
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> Nice format - it's always good to have little bios about the different
> characters :)
I actually borrowed the layout of the character page from your Castle page.
I hope you don't mind :) Tables inside tables inside tables. It makes the
head spin!
Adrian
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