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Re: How about another short comic?
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 12 Dec 2001 21:04:36 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Adrian Drake writes:
> This is my first foray into comic style storytelling, and I think I really
> like it. This storyline is currently independent of my other one with the
> Kobayashis on the Isle Of Mist, but you never know, they might join together
> somewhere down the road...
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> Check it out, and let me know what you think of the layout and text. Is it
> easy enough to read and follow?
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> http://www.brickfrenzy.com/castle_cw_01a.html
The format makes for a fast and friendly read. Navigation is also a breeze.
I see the way that you took your pictures (above angle outside the building)
made for easy editing (... "just add text!" ...) I thought the blinding spell
was funny (the whole comic had a lighter subtone to it).
The thing with the comic view is that it's such a fast read - which is good,
but I'm still left wanting more :)
> There's also a new characters page and a slightly new layout on the main
> castle page, if you're interested in a little backstory on my new characters
> (there will be more, of course)
Nice format - it's always good to have little bios about the different
characters :)
-- Pawel
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| (...) That was my goal in this. Xander and Serena are comic heroes in the vein of the Hercules and Xena television shows, so there will be a reasonable dose of comedy in it. As for the photos, I planned them such that I could easily stick the text (...) (23 years ago, 12-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| This is my first foray into comic style storytelling, and I think I really like it. This storyline is currently independent of my other one with the Kobayashis on the Isle Of Mist, but you never know, they might join together somewhere down the (...) (23 years ago, 12-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw) !
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