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Hi all, I've just completed Chapter 3 of Bertar's expedition to the Isle of Mist, entitled "The Voyage, Part 2" (Yes, it's turning out to be a long voyage, but keep in mind that we're coming from the Great Desert at the edge of the world!) It can be (...) (23 years ago, 11-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) building the stuff up about the rather nasty-seeming king. -- Mark Nelson (23 years ago, 11-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) This is really cool! I am getting more and more into the story - the writing is clear and the plot moves fast. It's an interesting twist with the armor! Nothing like a little of motivation to make things personal. Again - the format of your (...) (23 years ago, 12-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Thanks for the compliments, Mark! I like adding little plot twists and mysteries that are slowly revealed as the story progresses. I just have to make sure I keep track of all the twists and turns that I throw in! Steve the_beakman@yahoo.com (...) (23 years ago, 12-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Thanks Pawel! Having someone say they're getting into my story is about the best compliment I can ask for! I wanted to give the expedition party members good motivations for wanting to travel to the Isle, and not necessarily the same ones, so (...) (23 years ago, 12-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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