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Re: Bertar's IOM Voyage, Part 2
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 12 Dec 2001 21:54:24 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> This is really cool! I am getting more and more into the story - the
> writing is clear and the plot moves fast. It's an interesting twist with
> the armor! Nothing like a little of motivation to make things
> personal.
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> Again - the format of your page is very effective.
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> -- Pawel
Thanks Pawel! Having someone say they're getting into my story is about the
best compliment I can ask for! I wanted to give the expedition party members
good motivations for wanting to travel to the Isle, and not necessarily the
same ones, so there may be some conflict. And motivations can change over time,
too (like Bertar, going from "because the King told me to" to "seeking
answers/justice").
I'm trying to keep the story moving along as best as I can, but it's hard to
find time to write sometimes, especially now that the busy holiday season is
approaching. I'm hoping to have Bertar reach the Isle soon, and maybe even get
some pictures up!
Steve
the_beakman@yahoo.com
The Great Desert - http://www.buffnet.net/~beakman/lego/castle/index.htm
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