 | | Re: Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story —Shiri Dori
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| | | (...) Hi Cale!! The story gives a good introduction to the main characters. Good job! I like the little exposition about Joshua and Catherine's past, and yet you manage to keep Catherine seem a bit secretive. An air of mystery around her motives. I (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | | | | Re: Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story —Cale Leiphart
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| | | | (...) Thanks for the compliments. I'm not sure where I'm going with the story yet. I guess that might depend a little on what we find once the mist starts receeding. (...) And thanks to all of you for the advice. Grammer was not my best subject in (...) (23 years ago, 15-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | | | | | Re: Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story —Jeff Stembel
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| | | | (...) I'd strongly suggest everyone's characters/parties have a goal for going to the Isle. It doesn't have to be earth-shattering or anything, just an ulterior motive that guides what they'll do and how they'll react to situations they encounter. (...) (23 years ago, 15-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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