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Re: More Elias and Blade ...
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> I've finally finished my second short comic about Elias and Blade.
> http://web.utk.edu/~pnazarew/new/
> After #3, I will take a backseat to this duo. Any suggestions on
> whom I should focus in issue #4? Check out the "people" page and
> e-mail me with ideas.
(Practicing my new "reply to all" button)
Nice. I laughed out loud seeing Blade towing the kaadu ( well, of course
it's not a kaadu as such, since this isn't STAR WARS(TM, grovel grovel)). An
leaving Elis speachless. You might note that in the picture showing Elis and
Blade landing there are a lot of other ships moored in the background. This
is probably intentional (i.e. I assume they are NOT on the isle of Mist) but
notable none the less. The fire is cool though. Lots of neat Brick Tricks
(C)[1] to steal...er borrow.
Another thing to possibly watch, or not given that languages are a lot more
subjective than pictures, are some of the idioms employed.
For example, I would say "not a moment too soon" or not a minute too soon"
rather than "it could not have come a minute sooner". Feel free to ignore me
here, I'm prolly just being overpicky.
But over all, it's terrible only because I wish I had my bricks (and a good
camera) here with me to do the same....
In regards to who next, I wouldn't mind seeing Cleo and the talons or a
short tale from Don Pavroni, I'm sure he's heard lots of good stories as a
barman.
James (who is happy to be corrected if he's overstepped constructive criticism)
[1] either Brick Tricks is (C) someone already in which case I'm sorry for
using it without permission or it's not in which case I Gerber[2] it immediatly.
[2] Gerber (adj) To stamp with excessive authority. eg. Lindsey's disclaimer in
http://news.lugnet.com/starwars/?n=11986
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| (...) Thanks for the feedback - I will take it into account when writing the third short comic. The ships are now edited out. So ... were they ever there? (twilight zone music kicks in) I always appreciate people's comments, especially when they are (...) (23 years ago, 12-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| I've finally finished my second short comic about Elias and Blade. (URL) #3, I will take a backseat to this duo. Any suggestions on whom I should focus in issue #4? Check out the "people" page and e-mail me with ideas. Thanks :) -- Pawel (23 years ago, 10-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw) !
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