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Re: Update: Sorjin's first week on the Isle of Mist
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Thu, 8 Nov 2001 01:27:09 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Tony Hafner writes:
> If you read my post with Sorjin's journal for the trip out, the second page
> of this story will look somewhat familiar. It has those same entries, but
> also has journal entries by the other members of the party mixed in between.
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> Check out the story at:
> http://www.hafhead.com/lego/mycastle/iom/index.html
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> This is my first attempt at storytelling with Lego, so I'm taking it
> slowly... so far I've only done one image per page to mainly give flavor and
> context. I hope to make future installments much richer with images, but I
> have a lot to build (and learn!) to do that right.
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> And yes- I would love some feedback. I love to get warm fuzzies, but
> negative feedback is great too, as long as it's useful. Send it privately
> if you don't want to flog me in front of everyone.
I like the three journals running concurently. Having the entries like
that, and seeing the same event from a couple different angles really adds
some depth.
I'm looking forward to seeing some more!
thanks,
James
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| If you read my post with Sorjin's journal for the trip out, the second page of this story will look somewhat familiar. It has those same entries, but also has journal entries by the other members of the party mixed in between. Check out the story (...) (23 years ago, 8-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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