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(...) I like the story - very good and fast read. You seem to have a good mixture and diversity in your characters - this should make the story more exciting as it goes on. I also like the layout of your new site - makes going about it very easy! -- (...) (23 years ago, 1-Jan-02, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | Re: IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
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(...) Hoohyah. The Wurm needs to do some massive reforming in the ranks of the nobility. Everybody else is fine -- like the soldiers, they just do what they're told. But the Councils are corrupt and such. Aye, 'tis the greed for power... (...) (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | Re: IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
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(...) People are falling like crazy! It's as if man's nature is when there is peace, he must still find someone to fight, so he turns on his brother. I like how you switch location three times in the story - gives the reader a quick run through of (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | Re: Xander's Airship: The Athena
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(...) mysterious ways and ends up being very aesthetically pleasing. I too liked the ninja wings to be used for sails, as well as the details that went into the interior. Overall, the whole ship is sturdy looking, and elements just "fit" - like they (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.build, lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Hehe. Space is at a premium on an airship of this size, so of course they're going to share the bed. But yes, they do have a pretty comfortable relationship ;) As for doing an airship, I needed one in order to be able to change locales (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.build, lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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