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Re: IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Sun, 16 Dec 2001 17:49:18 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> Man ... there is some serious corruption among the ranks in that society.
> People are falling like crazy! It's as if man's nature is when there is
> peace, he must still find someone to fight, so he turns on his brother.
Hoohyah. The Wurm needs to do some massive reforming in the ranks of the
nobility. Everybody else is fine -- like the soldiers, they just do what
they're told. But the Councils are corrupt and such.
Aye, 'tis the greed for power...
> I like how you switch location three times in the story - gives the
> reader a quick run through of your kingdom, and also shows the
> complexity of the conflict.
*Smiles* Thanks! I doubt anybody has realized yet just why Tay vanished. I
forgot to mention that footsteps can be heard easily, but none were heard
when Tay disappeared.
> That castle is coming along really nicely! I dig the ouside walls, especially
> the tiles on fences in the interior.
Thank you very much. :) I hope to get the Central Citadel done by Christmas.
--
Mark Nelson
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