Subject:
|
Re: IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
|
Newsgroups:
|
lugnet.castle.org.cw
|
Date:
|
Sun, 16 Dec 2001 17:42:25 GMT
|
Viewed:
|
1298 times
|
| |
|
|
In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Mark Nelson writes:
> Greetings to one and all!
>
> I am pleased to report that Part 3 of the story of the Wurmhold is now up! I
> didn't include their journey across the ocean, as it was uneventful.
>
> It can be viewed at:
>
> http://www.geocities.com/cmdr_speedy/wurmhold/story3.html
Man ... there is some serious corruption among the ranks in that society.
People are falling like crazy! It's as if man's nature is when there is
peace, he must still find someone to fight, so he turns on his brother.
I like how you switch location three times in the story - gives the
reader a quick run through of your kingdom, and also shows the
complexity of the conflict.
That castle is coming along really nicely! I dig the ouside walls, especially
the tiles on fences in the interior.
-- Pawel
|
|
Message has 1 Reply:
 | | Re: IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
|
| (...) Hoohyah. The Wurm needs to do some massive reforming in the ranks of the nobility. Everybody else is fine -- like the soldiers, they just do what they're told. But the Councils are corrupt and such. Aye, 'tis the greed for power... (...) (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
|
Message is in Reply To:
| | IOM: The Wurmhold: Part 3 up!
|
| Greetings to one and all! I am pleased to report that Part 3 of the story of the Wurmhold is now up! I didn't include their journey across the ocean, as it was uneventful. It can be viewed at: (URL) let me know what you think. If you haven't read (...) (23 years ago, 16-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
|
3 Messages in This Thread:
 
- Entire Thread on One Page:
- Nested:
All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:
All | Brief | Compact
This Message and its Replies on One Page:
- Nested:
All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:
All | Brief | Compact
|
|
|
|
