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Re: Caerany update
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lugnet.castle
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Wed, 19 Dec 2001 15:20:12 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Leonard Hoffman writes:
> After some building and photographing, I'm pleased to announce an update to my
> site.
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> http://www.lugnet.com/~1168/caerany/
[SNIP]
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> peace
> -lenny
Lenny,
Nice job! I like your storyline, it has a lot of potential for conflicts
(which I like): intrigue, territorial disputes, a heavy-handed occupying
government, freedom fighters, etc. I like the two battles, too. I like how the
second one shows that early gunpowder weapons were not necessarily invincible
on the battlefield. The cities and city descriptions are nicely done, and I
like the weapons encyclopedia you included (the Hacksword is nasty looking!).
Between the story and your descriptions of the tribes and nations, you've
really captured the feel of an entire country. Keep it up!
Steve
The Great Desert
http://www.buffnet.net/~beakman/lego/castle/index.htm
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| (...) thank you.. i was hoping that all those elements were coming through! (...) this was actually very important in the entire story, since the occuping gov't has gunpowder how could anyone fight them? but in reality there are some major (...) (23 years ago, 19-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| After some building and photographing, I'm pleased to announce an update to my site. (URL) More News (story), including two battles! (relatively small) the plot thickens! * News Pictures of Coplton Marketplace with Rikly's Blacksmith shop and the NA (...) (23 years ago, 18-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce)
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