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| (...) Yup. (...) Always good to have a fan, albeit slightly overzealous. (...) Yeah, it takes time to get a story ready. I just figured I'd release some things to make sure people remembered who I was. (...) Well, you are entitled to your opinions (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) I'm afraid I felt compelled to put the warning on my story. If you'll go back to the original site, you'll see it's there now too. I feel that if I want my story to be socially accepted, especially by non fan created websites, it would be to (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Okay, after a small review, I decided to edit some of the sentences. Most of the paragraphs were shortened, and I took the liberty to ameliorate the final paragraphs so they seem more readable. (...) True...they're rather abstruse at times...I (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Well, I sure hope my new website will be a competitor to the Kingdom of Ikros. I can only hope it'll be half as popular. I'm glad you liked my teaser so much, it took me a while to make it, especially with so few new pictures to work with. (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Thanks much! Well, I hope I don't disappoint anyone. I'm working on ironing out the plot, and it's turning out to be a rather interesting story. As for the dragons, well, I'm not promising anything... one way or the other. And thanks for the (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Thanks much! I don't know if I'll be putting out a new movie, I'm all out of good* music! But maybe, just maybe I can scrounge something up. (...) Chapter one of Chaos Skies won't be ready till at least after Christmas, if not after the new (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Hi Matt, I had a similar reaction. I couldn't find my way through your sentences. And I am a very skilled reader. (...) Your poetry is fine but your sentences are too long. (...) Nah, the sentences are just too long. Your poetry and meaning are (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Well, that's a shame to hear... When I write, I tend to place it in a poetic stance, however, I've seen the notion that some people prefer the more 'straightforward' type of writing, which I find rather boring. (...) You'll find (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Well, Matt, I'm not sure how much my comments will be "appreciated" as they are going to be in the vein of "discouraging words". I got about half-way through the second line of the first sentence, then pretty much gave up. I scrolled down through (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Did you mean by any chance, your story dwarfs in five dollar words compared to mine, or the other way around? Hmm...^_^ (...) Thanks for the feedback. (...) Heh...I hardly read enough as is...I draw a lot of anime, though, so that's a source (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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