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Re: The Mercurials - Lego Comic
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lugnet.build
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Mon, 16 Jul 2007 15:20:03 GMT
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Thanks for all the comments! All the suggestions so far have been most helpful.
It seems the story is on the right track, which is good. The two most common
“constructive criticisms” so far have been regarding showing who’s speaking in
the dialogue and the navigation from page to page.
Next episode we’re going to try out the face-pic avatar idea, and if that works,
we’ll go back and retrofit the first two episodes as well. We’ll also be simply
using all italics for thoughts and all caps for sound effects (with a general
avatar for those as well, I think). Hopefully that will allow folks to focus
more on the story and less on figuring out who’s talking!
For navigation, I’m going to implement some javascript so that the page doesn’t
have to reload each time and you can keep the mouse pointer hovering over one
link to go to the next page. And we’ll make the NEXT link a little more obvious
:)
Thanks again!
--Tom
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 | | Re: The Mercurials - Lego Comic
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| Very Interesting! I like the cinematic feel you have achieved (I must try that sometime) and despite some dialogue difficulties the presentation is very tight, though maybe a giant 'next' button would be in order. I look forward to seeing more. God (...) (17 years ago, 14-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)
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