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Re: The Mercurials - Lego Comic
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Fri, 13 Jul 2007 20:01:04 GMT
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In lugnet.build, Travis Cobbs wrote:
  
Perhaps if you gave each character a unique prefix? If you include colors with your greater than symbols, you’d probably not run out. But I think the most clear thing would be to take a small picture of each minifig’s face, and put that beside the text. It would be like an avatar in a message board. It would take up more vertical space for most quotes, but I think it would really be worth it.

--Travis

I really like the avatar idea, it would definately help, as the cast expands.

But this is a really great start. There’s so much detail, I feel like you know where you are going with it (something lacking from so many web comics). The mystery should be for the reader, not the writer.

The story is pretty interesting so far, the characters are developing well, and the scenery fits the mood well, though is a little simplistic for a static location.

Overall, an amazing job.

Aaron



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  Re: The Mercurials - Lego Comic
 
Thanks for the positive feedback. We'd hoped other folks would enjoy our strange experiment! Nicole and I really like the avatar idea, too. I'm going to play around with that and see if we can pull it together. I think that combined with some of the (...) (17 years ago, 14-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)

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(...) Perhaps if you gave each character a unique prefix? If you include colors with your greater than symbols, you'd probably not run out. But I think the most clear thing would be to take a small picture of each minifig's face, and put that beside (...) (17 years ago, 13-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)

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