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Hi all,
My castle site is finally up! Some of the sections are less finished than
others (the Structures page only contains one structure, for instance), but
there's still a lot to look at.
Any comments, questions and/or criticisms would be appreciated.
http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
Enjoy,
William Movish
P.S. Jay, you asked about hair color. I use special effects, and bleach it
out before I dye it.
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what an incredibly detailed site you have.. a chronology, bios, story.. i
haven't even done anything but looked over it shortly to know you've got a lot
of info packed into this thing. i look forward to seeing you expand it! as
well as some more MOCs.
one thing tho, your only structure doesn't have an exterior shot. could you be
so kind?
great job, keep it up!
peace and freedom
-lenny
In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Hi all,
>
> My castle site is finally up! Some of the sections are less finished than
> others (the Structures page only contains one structure, for instance), but
> there's still a lot to look at.
>
> Any comments, questions and/or criticisms would be appreciated.
>
>
> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
>
>
>
> Enjoy,
>
> William Movish
>
>
> P.S. Jay, you asked about hair color. I use special effects, and bleach it
> out before I dye it.
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> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
>
> Enjoy,
>
> William Movish
Your site is one of the coolest castle I've seen. Not because of the moc's,
like most rate the sites by, but because of the awesome detail and
organization. I love how simple it is to navigate the site. I really like
the bios of each person and that they are short and to the point, not long
and flowerey so that you get lost and have to reevaluate why you are even
reading the bio in the first place. The coolest part, imho, is that next to
each caracters' part there is their pictures.
I'm thinking Cool Site of the Week should be awarded very soon...
Keep up the great work and give us an update soon.
J Scott
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In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Hi all,
>
> My castle site is finally up! Some of the sections are less finished than
> others (the Structures page only contains one structure, for instance), but
> there's still a lot to look at.
>
> Any comments, questions and/or criticisms would be appreciated.
>
>
> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
I love the story- that's a wonderful way to set up a character! And using
avatar-style icons to represent who's talking works very well. The "story
within a story" also reads quite smoothly- I think the banter between the
tavern's inhabitants adds a lot.
Your range of character bios is large and well-integrated with a lot of
interesting stories crying out to be told.
The site has a very clean design too- low-tech and very navigable. Those
are both good things. Oh, and you have a cool spider, too.
I do have one suggestion regarding the image of two chrome swords that you
use as a divider all over the place: Change it to a .gif and make the
background transparent. The current background is suffering from
compression artifacts and doesn't match the page background.
--
Tony Hafner
www.hafhead.com
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In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Hi all,
>
> My castle site is finally up! Some of the sections are less finished than
> others (the Structures page only contains one structure, for instance), but
> there's still a lot to look at.
>
> Any comments, questions and/or criticisms would be appreciated.
>
>
> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
>
>
>
> Enjoy,
>
> William Movish
>
>
> P.S. Jay, you asked about hair color. I use special effects, and bleach it
> out before I dye it.
What a great site.... I love the story line.... very interesting.... cant
wait to see more of your work : )
Kev..: )
andrastavia@ozbricks.com
www.ozbricks.com/andrastavia
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Thanks everyone for your comments and support.
I hope to fix the fuzzy spacer image sometime soon (this weekend is most
likely).
Also, one thing I forgot to mention: there are quotes for each of the
characters and all but two of the creatures hidden as alt-text. You may
wish to mouse over their portraits as you peruse the Characters and
Creatures sections.
I meant to call attention to this somehow on the site itself, but a way of
elegantly wording it continues to allude me.
-William Movish
http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
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William,
Very nice work, the story looks very promising!
Magnus
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