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Re: Steel Falcon racer
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lugnet.space
Date: 
Thu, 16 Dec 2004 04:34:20 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Kevin Blocksidge wrote:
   In lugnet.space, Chris McNamee wrote:
   http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/6601

I dunno what’s with all my new racers lately, I’m not particularly fond of defenseless ships, but hey, they look really cool. And we all love big, powerful engines. Much of this was a study in greebling and SNOT techniques, and I think it turned out all right. Tell me what you think!

Hey Chris!

I like this alot. Its got a great shape, and you’ve shown good use of complex building techniques.

Thanks, I’ve been practicing a lot lately with small, individual sections of Legos. That’s just as much fun as regular building.

   But I think with a bit of modification, it could change from a “good” moc to a “great” one.

I like the blue & gray, with a hint of sand blue color scheme, but I feel it needs some unification in the nose/front section. Perhaps if you grouped the blue together, a district strip or styling could arise. At the moment, the switch between gray and blue seems almost random along the side of the nose.

I was thinking the same thing. I think it has something to do with the availability of parts, but I’ll see what I can do.

   I really like the front of the engines, but it gets weak towards the back. The wheels seem tacked on, there appears to be no flow between the nicely sculpted front and the wheel in the back. If I may be so bold, I suggest looking here, perhaps something there might spark your imagination.

Wow. Just wow, that is exactly the type of thing I was looking for. Thanks for sharing!

   Finally, it seems you built a great top and sides, but then forgot about the bottom. In space, there is no up and down ;) If you sculpt the bottom as much as the top, this craft could be killer. Also, those robot bodies come in darkgray, it might look better than tan. Although, come to think of it, if you integrated more tan into the craft, blue, gray, and tan might look quite well together.

It seemed to me that since it doesn’t really need weapons or anything, the bottom could just be smooth, but it would look cool with a few details, wouldn’t it? Admiral Gidden’s SMAC had a really cool bottom, maybe I should look at that a bit. As for the gear, I don’t have any dark gray droid bodies, or any other tan parts for that matter. Its a matter of being on a teenage budget :) (or the lack of any budget!).
   Anyway, a fine craft. I hope my little tidbits of advice helped.

~Kevoh

The advice was a big help! Thanks a bunch!

Chris



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(...) Hey Chris! I like this alot. Its got a great shape, and you've shown good use of complex building techniques. But I think with a bit of modification, it could change from a "good" moc to a "great" one. I like the blue & gray, with a hint of (...) (20 years ago, 16-Dec-04, to lugnet.space, FTX)

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