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Re: Steel Falcon racer
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lugnet.space
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Thu, 16 Dec 2004 03:20:33 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Chris McNamee wrote:
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http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/6601
I dunno what’s with all my new racers lately, I’m not particularly fond of
defenseless ships, but hey, they look really cool. And we all love big,
powerful engines. Much of this was a study in greebling and SNOT techniques,
and I think it turned out all right. Tell me what you think!
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Hey Chris!
I like this alot. Its got a great shape, and you’ve shown good use of complex
building techniques.
But I think with a bit of modification, it could change from a “good” moc to a
“great” one.
I like the blue & gray, with a hint of sand blue color scheme, but I feel it
needs some unification in the nose/front section. Perhaps if you grouped the
blue together, a district strip or styling could arise. At the moment, the
switch between gray and blue seems almost random along the side of the nose.
I really like the front of the engines, but it gets weak towards the back. The
wheels seem tacked on, there appears to be no flow between the nicely sculpted
front and the wheel in the back. If I may be so bold, I suggest looking
here, perhaps something
there might spark your imagination.
Finally, it seems you built a great top and sides, but then forgot about the
bottom. In space, there is no up and down ;) If you sculpt the bottom as much
as the top, this craft could be killer. Also, those robot bodies come in
darkgray, it might look better than tan. Although, come to think of it, if you
integrated more tan into the craft, blue, gray, and tan might look quite well
together.
Anyway, a fine craft. I hope my little tidbits of advice helped.
~Kevoh
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| (...) Thanks, I've been practicing a lot lately with small, individual sections of Legos. That's just as much fun as regular building. (...) I was thinking the same thing. I think it has something to do with the availability of parts, but I'll see (...) (20 years ago, 16-Dec-04, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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| Maybe this is bad timing, considering all the other issues going on, but hey, here's another MOC for you guys and gals. I've been reading the issues lately, and personally, I don't want to say a darn thing. None of it's really important, only the (...) (20 years ago, 16-Dec-04, to lugnet.space)
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