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Re: Lego Soccer Page
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lugnet.dear-lego
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Fri, 17 Mar 2000 04:57:08 GMT
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In lugnet.dear-lego, Thomas Main writes:
> Dear Lego,
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> The text on your soccer page preview [URL:http://www.lego.com/soccer/] reads:
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> "Meet the worlds best soccer player, learn to be a better player, compete,
> read
> the news, win great prices....and much more!"
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> Just a couple of grammatical points..."worlds" should be possessive of
> player...it should be "world's best soccer player." And "prices" are what you
> extract from us when we buy your product :) ...I'd rather not "win" more of
> those.
;-)
Also, the "s"s in that font look like "e"s.
-Shiri
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| Dear Lego, The text on your soccer page preview [URL:(URL) reads: "Meet the worlds best soccer player, learn to be a better player, compete, read the news, win great prices....and much more!" Just a couple of grammatical points..."worlds" should be (...) (24 years ago, 16-Mar-00, to lugnet.dear-lego)
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