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Lego Soccer Page
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lugnet.dear-lego
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Thu, 16 Mar 2000 14:30:34 GMT
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Dear Lego,
The text on your soccer page preview [URL:http://www.lego.com/soccer/] reads:
"Meet the worlds best soccer player, learn to be a better player, compete, read
the news, win great prices....and much more!"
Just a couple of grammatical points..."worlds" should be possessive of
player...it should be "world's best soccer player." And "prices" are what you
extract from us when we buy your product :) ...I'd rather not "win" more of
those.
--
Thomas Main
main@appstate.edu
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