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| (...) That's a good idea. I'll be having some "out-of-place" stories too, to explain the past, some of them will be told by a different character (Daphne) and it will not be immediately clear what it has to do with the present... but eventually, (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Thank you! I took what you and a few RTL lurkers from overseas said to heart... in my enthusiasm to post something, I didn't make the narrative aspects clear. Basically I had to change alot of verb tenses and add some quotation marks along (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Wow!!! I took some time to read it intently, that story is bee-utiful! I love it. The fact that it is now told by a specific person (can't remember if it was earlier) and all those little details.... great story! Reading this, I can't help but (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.off-topic.fun, lugnet.castle.org.cw, lugnet.admin.general)
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| (...) Oh, duh. Thanks! -Shiri (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.off-topic.fun, lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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