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Bryan,
First of all, I agree with everything that Nathan said about common
courtesy, and I was shocked when I read what you had written about Kevin's
comic. Yes comic, not an epic novel which you seem to have been expecting.
I really enjoyed the comic and how it was layed out. If you've ever read a
comic book, you'll note that each book does not have a long, drawn-out plot.
From what I understand, this first comic is only the introduction to
something more to come.
> I must say your story sucks. I don't care what most poeple say. It sucks.
> Yes , i'm entitled to my own opinion. And it is that your story sucks ass.
> Your'e probably all thinking "oh my gawd noone on Lugnet has said this to
> anyone before" but you know what? I did.
I agree that you are entitled to your own opinion, but lashing out like this
is just plain unacceptable. You could have at least written a post (nicely)
stating what you didn't like about the story and offering constructive
criticism to Kevin. And you really don't need the cursing, it adds nothing
to your opinion.
> I'm so sick of these stories that are like "if I have excessive gore and
> eye candy then I don't need a real story or next to any dialogue because the
> reader will be focused on the action."
May I also remind you that this is an ACTION comic, which IMO, should focus
on action more than storyline. Just a quick little story about a bunch of
guys fighting, which was definitely eye candy to my eyes.
> And what the hell is the story? In feudal Japan some Raiden wannabe wanders >around and kills people. Does he have a motive? We are not told. Why does he >kill thiefs and small time criminals? Read the first part of this paragraph. >And another thing is the dialogue it does have is utterly horrible. And >whats with the guy who keeps thinking "Oooh what a big stick."
How did you know what he was thinking?
> It seems your attempts at petty humor have fallen flat. The comic concept >isn't even very new , iv'e seen it used before. Also illustrating it >completely shows that you must have next to no talent for writing. Don't >write another chapter into this Wander "online image novella." How >pathectic , your'e trying to make a comic sound fancy. Don't write another >chapter , I don't want to see anythign else added to this hunking pile of >bullcrap. You suck. Stick to building , >because you obviously can't write.
Another thing Bryan, I've taken a look around your site and have seen no
MOC's or stories. So before you start a rant to ridicule another person's
hard work, just think, at least they have done something and shared it with
the community. And since you claim on your site that you consider yourself
a quote "pretty darned good writer", I'll be awaiting your epic masterpiece
of a story.
Wilson
http://www.sofast.net/~raska/
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