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I've thought up a story to go along with my castle MOC's and I've put one page up on the internet as a trial page to hopefully get some feedback. I have lots of story material, so I'm wondering if there are anybody fans of castle lego out there that (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background, maybe? Also, the (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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What a great idea Ryan! you've definitely created an interesting story to read! I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Have you started your MOC's yet for it? Matt (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Thankyou very much for taking a look at my story! Also thanx for the hints on the story background, i will definetly be changeing that. As far as proofreading, hehehe, i know, i know! :) I got my dad to read the story after I had posted it (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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