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Re: WANTED: Persons To Read My Trial Story! plz
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Fri, 1 Sep 2000 05:08:19 GMT
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Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things
about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes
with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background,
maybe? Also, the story could use a little proofreading, not that I should be
the one to talk. Other than that, it looks great, please share more! Will
there be pictures for the stories in the future?
Wilson
P.S. Where did you come up with the name for your "Sir Locke"? I got my
Locke's name from FFVI, is that where you derived your's from. Just
interested s'all.
In lugnet.castle, Ryan Cassell writes:
> I've thought up a story to go along with my castle MOC's and I've put one
> page up on the internet as a trial page to hopefully get some feedback.
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> I have lots of story material, so I'm wondering if there are anybody fans of
> castle lego out there that would be interested in my story. If noone is
> interested, then there's really no point in putting the stories on the
> internet. So I'm just looking for some people to read my trial page and give
> me some feedback, whether it be postitive or negative.
>
> If anyone is interested to play judge, or just to read the story, here's the
> link: http://www.members.home.net/ryancassell
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> Hopefully someone will take this bait and go to the link. :)
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> The main reason that I'm doing these stories is because I've been so inspired
> by other peoples stories involving their castle characters. Thankyou in
> advance! :)
>
> Happy Building!!
>
> Ryan Cassell (pre-AFOL)
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| (...) Thankyou very much for taking a look at my story! Also thanx for the hints on the story background, i will definetly be changeing that. As far as proofreading, hehehe, i know, i know! :) I got my dad to read the story after I had posted it (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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| I've thought up a story to go along with my castle MOC's and I've put one page up on the internet as a trial page to hopefully get some feedback. I have lots of story material, so I'm wondering if there are anybody fans of castle lego out there that (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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