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WANTED: Persons To Read My Trial Story! plz
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lugnet.castle
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Fri, 1 Sep 2000 02:34:04 GMT
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I've thought up a story to go along with my castle MOC's and I've put one
page up on the internet as a trial page to hopefully get some feedback.
I have lots of story material, so I'm wondering if there are anybody fans of
castle lego out there that would be interested in my story. If noone is
interested, then there's really no point in putting the stories on the
internet. So I'm just looking for some people to read my trial page and give
me some feedback, whether it be postitive or negative.
If anyone is interested to play judge, or just to read the story, here's the
link: http://www.members.home.net/ryancassell
Hopefully someone will take this bait and go to the link. :)
The main reason that I'm doing these stories is because I've been so inspired
by other peoples stories involving their castle characters. Thankyou in
advance! :)
Happy Building!!
Ryan Cassell (pre-AFOL)
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Message has 2 Replies:
 | | Re: WANTED: Persons To Read My Trial Story! plz
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| Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background, maybe? Also, the (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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