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Re: Orc War Wagon
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lugnet.castle
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Sat, 2 Aug 2003 11:27:52 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Anthony Sava wrote:
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So I built my Orc War Wagon.
I’m not 100% happy with it, so feel free to criticize (or praise if you
really like it) Just click on an image to see a larger view. • snip
Love it? Hate it? Tell me what you think.
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Hello Anthony,
It’s a good start with some nice details already, but I’m happy to give you some
suggestions.
1 - Try to mix in some black details between the brown, an Orc war device may
look scorched a bit here and there.
2 - Replace the Orange Wedge Plates with Dark Red ones.
3 - The long smooth wedge on the front looks too “crafted” for Orc workmanship.
If possible, I would suggest making something yourself with more edges, points
and geebles sticking out here.
4 - The weapon rack on the back looks too flat, maybe make it point out
triangular in the middle. (by building zig-zag, a stud more outwards to the back
each time you go a stud inwards from the side)
5 - More Orcs pushing it, and a mean push-crew supervisor with a whip
“co-ordinating” their efforts.
Please let me know what you think, or if you have any questions.
With friendly greetings, M. Moolhuysen.
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