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Re: The Four: Chapters 5-6
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Fri, 21 Feb 2003 20:43:55 GMT
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Nick,
I finally had the time to get to your story. It's really good so far. I
can't wait to see where it goes.
The overhead shot of Sun and Yen lying on the deck of the boat is really
nice. They certainly look day-dreamy.
You've got a lot of character threads started. it will be interesting to
see them all play out.
Keep up the good work.
--William
The Kingdom of Gatimrja
http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/
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| Here is the next bit of my saga. (URL) I finished the next two chapters and also a brief episode before chapter 5. Ch 5,6 are much longer than the previous ones, each averaging 9 pics. Also i tried a new format for the page to make it easier to read (...) (22 years ago, 18-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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