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I finished the next two chapters in my story. (URL) think it sets up the basic plot very well. I have some new camera software making pictures a lot easier to take so I will have a few more chapters and MOC soon!!! Of course questions and comments (...) (21 years ago, 5-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle) !
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Hey Nick! Wow what a great story! I can't imagine how I missed the announcement of Chapter 1 & 2. Question: Where did you come up with the name "the four" and what significance does it have? It is such an interesting title. Comment: The way the (...) (21 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) I guess this early the title doesn't make much sense so here is the explanation: The title refers to the Four Shade Stones. When the great summon, Shade, was destroyed, his power was divided and imbued into the stones from the Staves of Power. (...) (21 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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Very cool. You've developed the plot well, and the pictures really work with the text. I can't wait for more! It sounds very interesting. The only nitpick I have is that the text is too dark for my monitor. My monitor for some reason displays things (...) (21 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Actually others have said the same thing. I'm trying to figure out a good text color that is brighter but the same hue. There is a lot of text on my pages and the program i use to make the page is rather irritating to change all the text but i (...) (21 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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Hi Nick, The saga continues. I really like your use of dragon wings for a sail. Also the pikes you have are cool. Did you have to cut the blades off of your pirate sabers for that, or did the blades come from something else? Bruce (21 years ago, 7-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Sorry for the late reply. (I had a college entrance exam to take, and some editing of chapter five to rewrite.) Well, I did manage to get a few moments to review your story, and I was pleased to find that it was pretty original. (thank god it (...) (21 years ago, 7-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) I must apologize for not replying to this sooner, but after reading your story I felt compelled to post. Albeit short, I found your story well written and nicely illustrated. I liked some of the small details you put in the story, such as the (...) (21 years ago, 17-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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