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Re: Next Chapter
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lugnet.castle
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Thu, 6 Feb 2003 22:40:55 GMT
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Very cool. You've developed the plot well, and the pictures really work
with the text. I can't wait for more! It sounds very interesting.
The only nitpick I have is that the text is too dark for my monitor. My
monitor for some reason displays things really dark, even with the
brightness and contrast yanked up to maximum, and the text is only readable
by blocking it with the cursor.
However, I bet that this only applies to a few people.
I have one other question: were does this take place? The first characters
have Eastern names, yet some of the other people have European names.
Very nice story. The pictures and building is great- I particullarly like
the face you used for the king.
-JHK
In lugnet.castle, Nick Oranzi writes:
> I finished the next two chapters in my story.
> http://www.geocities.com/cheez11111/Stories
> I think it sets up the basic plot very well.
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> I have some new camera software making pictures a lot easier to take so I
> will have a few more chapters and MOC soon!!!
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> Of course questions and comments on my story and site are greatly appreciated.
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> -Nick
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| (...) Actually others have said the same thing. I'm trying to figure out a good text color that is brighter but the same hue. There is a lot of text on my pages and the program i use to make the page is rather irritating to change all the text but i (...) (21 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| I finished the next two chapters in my story. (URL) think it sets up the basic plot very well. I have some new camera software making pictures a lot easier to take so I will have a few more chapters and MOC soon!!! Of course questions and comments (...) (21 years ago, 5-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle) !
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