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Re: Next Chapter
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lugnet.castle
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Mon, 17 Feb 2003 17:32:04 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Nick Oranzi writes:
> I finished the next two chapters in my story.
> http://www.geocities.com/cheez11111/Stories
> I think it sets up the basic plot very well.
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> I have some new camera software making pictures a lot easier to take so I
> will have a few more chapters and MOC soon!!!
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> Of course questions and comments on my story and site are greatly appreciated.
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> -Nick
I must apologize for not replying to this sooner, but after reading your story
I felt compelled to post.
Albeit short, I found your story well written and nicely illustrated. I liked
some of the small details you put in the story, such as the grey face for the
corpse that washed ashore and the use of a ferry to take passengers to a ship
too large for the port. The story itself is intriguing and without any further
explanation (at least until I read your replies), very mysterious.
Keep up the great work, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
--Anthony
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