 | | Kingdom of Gatimrja - Chapter II —William Movish
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| | | The next chapter in my castle story is up. You can see it at: (URL) accessible directly from the Updates section on the main page, or from the Stories page. As always, comments and criticism are appreciated. Let me know what you think. --William (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce)
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| | | | | Re: Kingdom of Gatimrja - Chapter II —Daniel Ravenda
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| | | | | (...) Cool chapter. The best was with the spider. That was a great idea not to mention a cool spider. I also finally read chapter one. All and all bothe were great. (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | Re: Kingdom of Gatimrja - Chapter II —Leonard Hoffman
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| | | | great story! excellent use of simple backgrounds! criticism: the whole thing about the prince. it pops up at the end of chap. 1 and ends shortly into chap. 2. hopefully this means its not a dead subplot, because i don't see where its going. also you (...) (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | Re: Kingdom of Gatimrja - Chapter II —William Movish
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| | | | Thanks for the comments. Fear not, the Prince will return. I've gotten a lot of positive reactions to him, so I have no plans to cut him out of the story. Unfortunately, there are two more chapters before he comes back into the picture. Although, I (...) (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle)
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