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| (...) Well done. The dialogue, I thought, was cleverly written and the action matched up well. I liked the facial portrates identifying the different speakers also. Keep up the good work. --Anthony (URL) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) I agree, except that the thumbnail portraits were a bit too small to readily distinguish the speaker, especially when he was wearing a helmet. . . I also thought that helmet inconspicuously leaping off a head at Aemilia's language was neat (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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