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| Hey guys and gals, After weeks of promising, here it is, the fourth chapter in the chronicles of Velaria! It's been added to my site: (URL) the Chronicles section, but if going there on your own is too much work, here's a direct link: (URL) always, (...) (23 years ago, 21-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Good stuff as always. Sounds like we've reached the end of the backstory, eh? Does this mean we'll get to read that cool first chapter again? :) I also really like the new format, makes it much easier to read. Keep it up! --Anthony (23 years ago, 22-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| always great! criticism: as time progresses more and more happens quicker, and it seems to start buring it here. i didn't really feel like chap4 was an entire 'age', which would presumably have a solid beginning and end (some historically important (...) (23 years ago, 22-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle)
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