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Island of Mist Chapter 1 Head Off
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Sun, 20 Jan 2002 19:25:11 GMT
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Alright in the past I had spelling problems but trust me this was checked
and rechecked by me and my sister. Its a short first chapter about 2 pages
long. Enjoy and tell me what you think. Tell me if you find a spelling error
and I will fix it. sure it's not a story like Wilson's Chris's Anthony's or
any one elses at that, but I like it and I think after a few chapters you
will love. It's calle Head Off. I must say i got some insperation from the
tv show Cheers and wepon ideas from Tim Deering. Jin is a charecter of Ivan
Paltinca a friend from school other that every thing is original. I will
warn you there are very little MOCs in group 1 but the MOCs I have put in
here are not that great.
http://www.geocities.com/dvendezzz/headoffpage1.html
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| (...) but I think that is something you'll just get better at as you continue. One other thing- your images are somewhat distorted. I see that the actual images are much larger than they appear on the page, and you are using HTML to resize them. But (...) (23 years ago, 21-Jan-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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