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Re: A Town Complete and an Update Too
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lugnet.castle
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Mon, 8 Oct 2001 02:35:47 GMT
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overall very cool.. i enjoyed it alot!
im not sure if i said this before, but i particularly like that the
undead/evil guys have character has well as goodies.. im sure this will
cause issues in the future!
the city is beautiful.. very inspiring.
i really enjoyed reading the story.. plot is progressing well, and carsot's
character is intriguing. and the only let down is some grammar issues,
particularly comma splices. it was enough to kinda bother me; usually i
don't care about stuff like that.. but it interupted my reading.
another point, just so you know, fyi: 'kazak' is a group of central asian
nomads who live in the former soviet republic of kazakstan.. not that you
should change the name or anything, just be advised.
again, overall great.. i eagerly await more!
peace
-lenny
In lugnet.castle, Clay Steele writes:
> Finally, after a long while, I have finally finished the city of Kessica!
> *Applause* *Applause*
> Other Updates include:
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> --Chapters 2, 3, and 4 are finished in the story
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> --My bro Chandler and I finished a new airship, found under the Creations
> section
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> --And A few new bios have been added under Mages and Mercenaries found in
> the people section
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> *More Applause*
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> So with further ado...boing splat gorsh snorble frazzle zoop...okay, now
> that the ado has passed, here is
> the link:
> http://www.geocities.com/hyalica/hyalica.html
>
> ~~Clay S.
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